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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
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The line graph provides information about how the amount of
waste
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 materials which was generated by
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company
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Company
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 A,
Company
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B
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,and
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company
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Company
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 C between the years 2000 and 2015.
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,It can be seen that The
propotion
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proportion
 of
waste
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 produced by
Company
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 C increased,
wereas
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whereas
 it decreased in
Company
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 A and
Company
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B
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.
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,the quantity of
waste
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generate
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generated
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 by
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company
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Company
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B
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 was consistently lower over the period shown. Looking at the data sets
thats
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that
 increased,it
evident
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 that the generation of
waste
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meterials
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materials
 in
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company
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Company
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 C stood at about 4
tonnes
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 in 2000.By 2015,it had increased
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from
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 6
tonnes
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 to 10
tonnes
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 in 2005 to 2015,respectively. Turning to the remaining data sets that decreased,it can be seen that the
waste
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 materials produced by
Company
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 A approximately 12
tonnes
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 in 2000. The figures go down to 8
tonnes
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 in 2015.The
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of
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waste
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 in
company
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B
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 stood at 8
tonnes
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 in 2000,
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, it grew to 11
tonnes
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 in 2005
then
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 decreased to 3
tonnes
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 in 2015,dramatically. Which was the lower point over the period shown.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, b, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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