In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

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on the rise in many countries, others stated that there are many possibilities

such

as lifestyles and

nutritions

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resulting in

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can be resolved and how both

individuals

and the authorities step in to prevent

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with, it seems sensible for many people to believe that lifestyles and

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are the main

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incidents.

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slowly induced the change of lifestyles of today's people to become more inactive

as well as

the rising popularity of foods and drinks with high fat, calories and sugar. In

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sense,

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of these aforementioned factors can contribute youngster to become fat more than in the past. To simply explain, gadgets like smartphones and Television attract young kids to become a potato

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couch

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and prefer to use their time online rather than going out and

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around with other kids. Poor diets like greasy fried

dishs

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dishes

are more appealing to kids than boiled green vegetables that

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more nutritious.

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, I believe that there are several means to tackle

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issue from both

individuals

and governments seeing that

this

problem

is manageable. In regards to

individuals

, parents serve the main role

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this

problem

in order to resolve

this

appropriately.

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rewarding

after eating

healthy

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diet can help

children

to get good nutrition

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the family activity can influence

children

to burn out these extra calories.

Government

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on the other hand

, should promote

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awareness of obesity in the young as a national

problem

and support active physical

acitivities

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activities

for them

more

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like more accessibility of playgrounds in the local areas. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that

this

problem

emerged, yet we all know that there are various variables that

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to become

obesed

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obese

like

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sendentary

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sedentary

lifestyle and poor diet control, I am of the opinion that

this

concerning

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can alleviate with the participation from

individuals

and government in order to create healthy

children

society in the long-run.