The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.
The table compares data about the percentage of tax in 5 countries,mainly Sweden,the USA,Korea,Japan and Turkey over 30
years
,between 1975 and 2005.
Overall
,it is clear that
Koreans gave the least amount of money to taxes in all years
. Additionally
,People
in Sweden paid more tax than other countries in 30 years
. Japan increased to double their tax in this
period.
Although
Sweden people
gave 46% of their budget in 1975, Americans paid 25.1% this
year. After 20 years
,in 1995 this
number jumped to 51% for Swedes and 27.1% for the USA citizens. At the end
of the period,Swedes gave 70.1% of their money and Americans paid 27.4%. Moreover
, Koreans spent 15.1% in 1975 and this
data increased to 27.% in 1985.And after ten years
this
number decreased to 26%. Korean people
gave 27.3% in 2005. Furthermore
,Japanese and Turkey people
wasted 15 and 16.4% respectively in 1975.While
this
number fell to 23 and 24% in 1995.Interestingly is that at the end
of the period, Japanese people
gave 32.1% and Turkeans wasted 27.4%Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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