You hired a car company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you of an incident that took place on the 10th of September. I rented a car from Jumeirah Beach in Dubai to travel to Abu Dhabi. After travelling for about an hour, there was a dust storm and visibility was greatly reduced,

due to

which the car's side mirror struck a pole on the side of the road and was totally destroyed. After the mishap, I called the insurance and waited for about 15 minutes, the insurance guys came and took the photos and all the necessary details about the accident. The insurance company confirmed that all the expenses will be covered. The mistake from my side was that I should have stopped the car and let the storm pass. Thankfully there was no casualty and my friends were not harmed. Please let me know if you find any scratches or dents that I might have caused on the journey and I would be happy to cover any expenses. Thanks and Regards, Salman

Submitted by salman.saeed on Wed Oct 02 2024

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task achievement

The letter provides a clear account of the accident and subsequent actions taken. However, offering more specific details about the car rental process and the exact location of the accident may strengthen the task response.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are generally well-organized, but adding a concluding sentence at the end of each paragraph could enhance the overall coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

You maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for this context.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriately used and fit well within the formal context of the letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
cooperate
return
reference number

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You hired a car company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What measures do you think might be effective?

Advertisements are the most important marketing startegy to enhance the sale of products ? Do you agree or disagree?

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them.

What impact does the tool have on planning and policy-making for future governments?