The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides information on the development of a museum that have been done between 1998 and 2008. Its
overall
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extension is clearly illustrated. The building of a museum is a rectangle with a square garden inside. In 1990 a museum consisted mostly of permanent exhibitions as most of the rooms surrounding the garden, except for the small café at the back, were the rooms containing art. Only the front part of the building housed a temporary exhibition on the left
as well as
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a shop and the WC on the right. Between them, there was an entrance and exit room with tickets. By 2008 a massive development has been observed. All the permanent exhibition rooms were placed on the right side of the building, between the entrance at the front and the café with the WC on the back. The garden, which remained in its original place was completed by fountains and a
caffe
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cafe
Caffe
sitting area. A restaurant on the left side of the café was added, and the temporary exhibition was relocated to the left wall of the building, behind the shop which was placed on the left side of the entrance.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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