The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the changes made to the
museum
between 2010 and 2013. In 2010, the
museum
consisted of a few main areas, including the Ocean Hall at its
center
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centre
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, with separate sections for mammals and dinosaurs. The entrance was connected to the lobby, and a garden was situated outside the
museum
. The layout was relatively simple, with only basic exhibits and no additional facilities like shops or cafes. By 2013, several significant developments were made to expand the
museum
. A new "Ice Age" section was added,
along with
an "Insects" exhibit adjacent to the dinosaurs. The right side of the
museum
was developed
further
with the addition of a "Human Origins Display,"
along with
a shop and café for visitors.
While
the original sections remained, the
overall
space was used more efficiently, offering a broader range of exhibits and visitor amenities.
Overall
, the
museum
saw substantial expansion and modernization between 2010 and 2013, enhancing both its exhibits and visitor experience.
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