The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate the changes made to the

museum

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between 2010 and 2013. In 2010, the

museum

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consisted of a few main areas, including the Ocean Hall at its

center

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, with separate sections for mammals and dinosaurs. The entrance was connected to the lobby, and a garden was situated outside the

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. The layout was relatively simple, with only basic exhibits and no additional facilities like shops or cafes. By 2013, several significant developments were made to expand the

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. A new "Ice Age" section was added,

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an "Insects" exhibit adjacent to the dinosaurs. The right side of the

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was developed

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with the addition of a "Human Origins Display,"

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a shop and café for visitors.

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the original sections remained, the

overall

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space was used more efficiently, offering a broader range of exhibits and visitor amenities.

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, the

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saw substantial expansion and modernization between 2010 and 2013, enhancing both its exhibits and visitor experience.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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