The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.
The given table illustrates the changes in the expanse of duty in Sweden, the USA,Korea,
Japan
and Turkey by the percentage of GDP from 1975 to 2005.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the lowest percentage between countries was in Linking Words
Japan
, nearly till the end of the period it grew to 2 palaces. Use synonyms
In addition
, in the Linking Words
last
year, three countries were around in the same position.
In the first 2 years, Sweden occupied the first positions (46%,47%).Following, Korea in 1975 earned apparently 15%,but after ten years it experienced increasing of around about 12%.Despite them, Linking Words
Japan
and Turkey earned the smallest amount of levy (around 16,15%) from 1975 to 1985 respectively.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, as previously the USA in 1995 and 2005 stayed stable (about 24%). Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
other
Correct word choice
apply
Japan
and Sweden rapidly increased in the Use synonyms
last
years by around 9% and 20%. Linking Words
Finally
, Turkey collected generally around 11% of the tax.Linking Words
Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
▼