Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Undoubtedly,
fuel
that comes from cars
is one of the reasons for the rise in pollution
today, and the local government
must increase the prices of the fuel
due to
this
process will reduce the traffic as well as
the pollution
issues. This
essay will discuss do I agree or disagree with this
particular topic and the measures that I think it is going to be effective.
On the one hand, there is no denying that most people are consuming and destroying the environment by using cars
with fuel
access. In addition
, the government
should take the leader's rule and make the fuel
costs more expensive. For instance
, a study showed that 79% of environmental scientists had advised individuals to begin
cycling due to
the fuel
that comes from cars
to the streets causing immense pollution
to the air as well as
trees. So by using healthier transport, the issues will disappear.
On the other hand
, there is another solution to take if people do not want to cooperate. For example
, electric cars
are going to be quite effective in this
case, and there will be no more pollution
coming from any type of fuel
. Therefore
, many car companies like Tesla and Ford are producing electric cars
due to
the government
's compulsory about the pollution
. however
, the traffic will not disappear with any sort of cars
on the street. I personally think that to solve the traffic issue; the government
must enlarge the streets for individuals or make healthy free transport like an electric train.
To sum up
, although
opinions may vary, I believe that the increases in fuel
prices are going to solve plenty of issues such
as pollution
disappearing and green tree quality ( etc.). In terms of effective solutions, electric cars
and trains are going to be a better solution for the environment as well as
enlarge the streets for people's needs.Submitted by ferasmirza11 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a clear main idea, and use linking words to improve the logical flow between and within paragraphs.
task achievement
Your arguments would be stronger if you provided specific data or examples that directly link petrol prices to traffic and pollution reductions, and explained the connection succinctly.
task achievement
The essay effectively defines your position on the issue and outlines potential solutions, such as promoting electric cars and cycling.
coherence cohesion
Overall, there is a clear introduction and conclusion which frame the essay effectively.