Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Undoubtedly,
fuel
that comes from Use synonyms
cars
is one of the reasons for the rise in Use synonyms
pollution
today, and the local Use synonyms
government
must increase the prices of the Use synonyms
fuel
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due to
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this
process will reduce the traffic Linking Words
as well as
the Linking Words
pollution
issues. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss do I agree or disagree with Linking Words
this
particular topic and the measures that I think it is going to be effective.
On the one hand, there is no denying that most people are consuming and destroying the environment by using Linking Words
cars
with Use synonyms
fuel
access. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
government
should take the leader's rule and make the Use synonyms
fuel
costs more expensive. Use synonyms
For instance
, a study showed that 79% of environmental scientists had advised individuals Linking Words
to begin
cycling Linking Words
due to
the Linking Words
fuel
that comes from Use synonyms
cars
to the streets causing immense Use synonyms
pollution
to the air Use synonyms
as well as
trees. So by using healthier transport, the issues will disappear.
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On the other hand
, there is another solution to take if people do not want to cooperate. Linking Words
For example
, electric Linking Words
cars
are going to be quite effective in Use synonyms
this
case, and there will be no more Linking Words
pollution
coming from any type of Use synonyms
fuel
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, many car companies like Tesla and Ford are producing electric Linking Words
cars
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due to
the Linking Words
government
's compulsory about the Use synonyms
pollution
. Use synonyms
however
, the traffic will not disappear with any sort of Linking Words
cars
on the street. I personally think that to solve the traffic issue; the Use synonyms
government
must enlarge the streets for individuals or make healthy free transport like an electric train.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
although
opinions may vary, I believe that the increases in Linking Words
fuel
prices are going to solve plenty of issues Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
pollution
disappearing and green tree quality ( etc.). In terms of effective solutions, electric Use synonyms
cars
and trains are going to be a better solution for the environment Use synonyms
as well as
enlarge the streets for people's needs.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a clear main idea, and use linking words to improve the logical flow between and within paragraphs.
task achievement
Your arguments would be stronger if you provided specific data or examples that directly link petrol prices to traffic and pollution reductions, and explained the connection succinctly.
task achievement
The essay effectively defines your position on the issue and outlines potential solutions, such as promoting electric cars and cycling.
coherence cohesion
Overall, there is a clear introduction and conclusion which frame the essay effectively.