Successful sport professionals earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified, while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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amount of money to successful

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players rather than other pivotal professionals,

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others disagree with

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amount of salary for athletes have several reasons.

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players need to be consistently trained before participating in a competition. As they are expected to win, they have particular trainers who exercise them hard.

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, badminton athletes are scheduled to be daily trained

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years before joining an international competition.

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professionals bring the big name of their nation, and thereby it will be

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a prestigious to achieve an award.

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, these people believe that athletes deserve to receive bigger income.

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, individuals who argue that it is an unjustified policy believe that other professions have more crucial roles

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society. Doctors,

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instance, need to stand by 24 hours a day in case there is an emergency call from a hospital.

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, they need to take longer years than ordinary bachelors in order to complete their medical degrees. Their average salary,

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, was only less than half of

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players per year, even though they cure diseases and save patients'

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contribution to society is not impactful, it is so unfair to provide astronomical

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of money for them. In conclusion,

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professionals earn a great deal of money because they need to complete a long training process and they are

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representatives in an international competition.

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, I firmly believe that it is unfair because they do not have

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impact

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communities and other professions are more impactful to society in terms of providing services.