The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The table illustrates the three different sources of police
budget
in 2017 and 2018 and the table compares the three areas that the Use synonyms
money
is distributed to. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
budget
Use synonyms
increases
slightly in 2018, most of which Wrong verb form
increased
comes
from the national government and the the least amount of Wrong verb form
came
money
Use synonyms
comes
from other resources. The proportion of salaries for staff accounts Wrong verb form
came
the
most Change preposition
for the
although
it declines gradually Linking Words
in contrast
to technology with a small rise.
Starting with the table, the total amount of Linking Words
Use synonyms
budget
Correct article usage
the budget
increases
slightly from just above 300 Wrong verb form
increased
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
in 2007 to about 318 Fix the agreement mistake
euros
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
euros
Furthermore
, all the sources fund more Linking Words
money
in 2018 than in 2017 with the national Use synonyms
goverment
distributing the most Correct your spelling
government
money
with about 177 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
euro
, followed by local taxes with around 102 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
euro
. Use synonyms
Nevertherless
, the least amount of Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
money
is Use synonyms
founded
Verb problem
found
by
other resources with over 38 Change preposition
on
million
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
euro
in 2018.
Turning to the pie chart, the largest rate of Fix the agreement mistake
euros
budget
goes to salaries for staff and officers with 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018. As it Use synonyms
experieces
a small drop in 2018, the proportion of Correct your spelling
experiences
experienced
money
distributed to technology Use synonyms
rises
dramatically from 8% to 14 % respectively. Wrong verb form
rose
On the other hand
, the rates of Linking Words
money
for buildings and transport remain steady at 17% in both years, making it the second most dominant area of the three.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, money, million, euro with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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