An increasing number of doctors and professors are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does it cause and what are the solutions.

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3Word repetition
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4 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Brain drain
Human capital flight
Developing countries
Developed countries
Healthcare system
Educational sector
Medical expertise
Foreign aid
Economic disparities
Professional retention
Work incentives
Infrastructure
Temporary migration
Knowledge transfer
Telemedicine
E-learning
Mentorship
International cooperation
Manpower

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An increasing number of doctors and professors are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does it cause and what are the solutions.

Fully explain your ideas

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction for all workers? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach cultural interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities, but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.