Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

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argue that

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should filter

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of websites and why they should not.

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with,there is no doubt that

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approach may protect the vulnerable populations from dangers.Parents have provided at least one tablet each to their children.As their parents are busy working,no one can observe their usage of the devices.

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,the younger generations love to watch videos on YouTube,

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,not all YouTube

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is suitable for their age.

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,if they click a video in which their target audience is not them,it would disrupt their intellectual development.In short,by doing

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we can save underage

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from harmful

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, one of the setbacks of

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approach is that it is likely to limit virtual interaction between humans.To illustrate,

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of different ages use the

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to communicate with their friends and

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relatives to update what's new in their lives via Zoom,Google Meet and many more.Aside from that,information about global issues is impossible.In light of

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,certain

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have mutuals on their social media platforms which they share about the recent issue in their country.

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,it will be harder for us to connect with

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if the

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filters information on the

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some

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think the

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should filter the

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of certain sites, the

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played a vital role in connecting

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from different places.

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,it is evident that despite we could protect younger generations from any harm,we cannot deny the

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is part of us

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now.After a thorough analysis of

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topic,the

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should enforce a new law regarding

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regulations for minors.