The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above displays the
changes
that were made to the plan
for the public library floor , and how it looked 20 years ago versus now.
In general , many changes
have been made to the original plan
that was made , as well as
, changes
to the structure of the floor .However
, only the entrance of the floor remained unchanged .
To start with , there was an enquiry about booking tickets and booking returns in the previous plan
, while
in the recent one, it has been replaced by the cafe that is
built with a door heading left towards the entrance . The reading room
has been changed into a computer room
. Moreover
, the main hall initially
had a sitting area which has been removed in the adjusted plan
.
Furthermore
, the children's room
in the new plan
is replaced with the lecture room
, and also
some changes
were made to the CDs, videos and computer games room
, which has been changed to a room
where storytelling events are held . Additionally
, two sofas were added as well as
the children's fiction books
corner .
Many significant changes
were made in the main hall as well where the non-fiction books
were removed from the plan
and adult fiction books
were relocated to the right side of the hall in addition
to the information desk and the self-services
machines . Correct your spelling
self-service
While
in the left side , all reference books
were located .Submitted by doingnunita12 on
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