The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above displays the
changes
that were made to the Use synonyms
plan
for the public library floor , and how it looked 20 years ago versus now.
In general , many Use synonyms
changes
have been made to the original Use synonyms
plan
that was made , Use synonyms
as well as
, Linking Words
changes
to the structure of the floor .Use synonyms
However
, only the entrance of the floor remained unchanged .
To start with , there was an enquiry about booking tickets and booking returns in the previous Linking Words
plan
, Use synonyms
while
in the recent one, it has been replaced by the cafe Linking Words
that is
built with a door heading left towards the entrance . The reading Linking Words
room
has been changed into a computer Use synonyms
room
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the main hall Linking Words
initially
had a sitting area which has been removed in the adjusted Linking Words
plan
.
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Furthermore
, the children's Linking Words
room
in the new Use synonyms
plan
is replaced with the lecture Use synonyms
room
, and Use synonyms
also
some Linking Words
changes
were made to the CDs, videos and computer games Use synonyms
room
, which has been changed to a Use synonyms
room
where storytelling events are held . Use synonyms
Additionally
, two sofas were added Linking Words
as well as
the children's fiction Linking Words
books
corner .
Many significant Use synonyms
changes
were made in the main hall as well where the non-fiction Use synonyms
books
were removed from the Use synonyms
plan
and adult fiction Use synonyms
books
were relocated to the right side of the hall Use synonyms
in addition
to the information desk and the Linking Words
self-services
machines . Correct your spelling
self-service
While
in the left side , all reference Linking Words
books
were located .Use synonyms
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