The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

map

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depicts the layout of

measure

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the measure

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in 1998 and in 2008 some transformations have

made

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been made

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in 2008 in the museum. After analysing the

map

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, in 1998, there were permanent

exhibition

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rooms

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in the north-west

while

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,the north-east

also

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covered with

the

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apply

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permanent

exhibition

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rooms

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Furthermore

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in the

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south-west,

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south-west

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southwest

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there were temporary

exhibition

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rooms

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whilst

south-east

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southeast

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some area was covered with permanent

exhibition

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rooms

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along with

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a shop, WC and bags and coats.The

center

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centre

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of the

map

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consists of a garden and tickets , entrance and exit

were

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are

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at the bottom of the

map

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Further

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, in 2008 after some changes in northwest restaurants were constructed and

northeast

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the northeast

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was unaltered.

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shops' bags and coats were transformed toward the southwest,

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is shifted to the upper of the

map

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beside the cafe.

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however

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However

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the south-west contains permanent

exhibition

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rooms

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, whilst, a cafe sitting area and fountain are built in the centre of the

map

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Overall

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, some changes were made in the new plan as it can be seen cafe sitting area and fountain were established in 2008.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, exhibition, rooms with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rectangular shape
central garden area
symmetrically arranged
expanded galleries
visitor flow management
temporary exhibition space
permanent gallery
visitor facilities
customer service focus
dedicated children's area
expanded restroom facilities
museum gardens
unoccupied outdoor space
shift towards long-term exhibits

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Nowadays some professions such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries.

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