Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?
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, cities like Hong Kong have developed efficient public transport systems that make it convenient for residents to travel without relying on personal vehicles. Meanwhile, another effective way is to create a safe bicycle-friendly area, that could encourage people to ride bicycles for short-distance movement, like Amsterdam is a successful city for bicycling, and the residents choose cycling more than driving.
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