The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of whicg may be unhealthy if easten too much,
The pie charts illustrate the average proportions of three types of nutrients found in typical meals, all of which can be detrimental if consumed in excess.
Supper is the unhealthiest meal of the day in
USA
because of its high content of each Correct article usage
the USA
nutritions
. The high percentage of one nutrient eaten in one meal Correct your spelling
nutrition
is
comes Unnecessary verb
apply
for
sodium in supper - 43%.
Sodium and saturated fat are mostly Change preposition
from
consuming
in dinner compared to other Wrong verb form
consumed
nutritions
in the USA. Breakfast has the lowest content of Replace the word
nutrients
Linking Words
this
three nutriments which are almost the same in numbers. In comparison to dinner, Correct determiner usage
these
proportion
of added Add an article
the proportion
nutrient
in breakfast is two times less.
The highest portion of consumed sugar in one day belongs to snacks which is Fix the agreement mistake
nutrients
fourty
two per cent. Lunch is in Correct your spelling
forty
the
third place in the Correct article usage
apply
overall
Linking Words
percantages
of three nutriments added. The lowest consumption of saturated fat and sodium in a single day Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
relate
to lunch.Correct subject-verb agreement
relates
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