the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The line graph depicts the
number
of tourists visiting a Caribbean island
in 7-year
period.
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the 7-year
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, total
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a total
the total
number
of visitors
grow considerably, with satying
on Correct your spelling
sitting
cruise
overtaking staying on Correct article usage
the cruise
island's
popularity by mid-2015.
In 2010, one Correct article usage
the island's
millions
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million
of
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apply
visitors
visited the island
, the majority of whom prefered
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preferred
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the island
the
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a
cruise
. The number
of visitors
prefering
to stay on Correct your spelling
preferring
prefer
island
remained unchanged Add an article
the island
untill
early-2011, at almost 0.7 Correct your spelling
until
million
. By the same time, the number
of visitors
staying on a cruise
reached 0.5 million
.
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of visitors
staying on island
rose gradually to a high of 1.5 Add an article
the island
million
by 2013 and remained unaltered for the following 2 year
. The Change to a plural noun
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number
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staying on cruise
, Add an article
a cruise
the cruise
on the other hand
, increased to just over 1 million
by 2015, before witnwssing
a drop to its Correct your spelling
witnessing
inital
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initial
number
by 2012. Between 2015 and 2016 total number
of visitors
plateaued. and by mid-2015 the number
of cruise
voyagers and those who stayed on the island
were the same, at about 1.3 million
. By the end of the period
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period,
cruise
was the prefered
dwell for Correct your spelling
preferred
visitors
as 2 millions
of Fix the agreement mistake
million
total
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a total
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of 3.5
million
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stayed Correct your spelling
people
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