The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the
swifting
landscape of Islip town centre between Correct your spelling
shifting
current
and Correct article usage
the current
in
the future.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, this
place are
Change the verb form
is
planing
to change in Correct your spelling
planning
terima
of congestion building and Correct your spelling
terms
infratructure
aspects. There will be Correct your spelling
infrastructure
an even more facilities
around Correct the article-noun agreement
an even more facility
even more facilities
a shops
that Correct the article-noun agreement
shops
a shop
located
consistently in the middle. Add a missing verb
are located
In addition
, infrastructure will be even integrated surrounding the facilities.
Town
planned to add even more Add an article
The town
building
than now. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Country side
, Correct your spelling
Countryside
two
lined shops, two
housing area
, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
school
, and Correct article usage
a school
park
are Correct article usage
a park
unneatly
spotted. Correct your spelling
run neatly
Then
, developer
planned to build Add an article
the developer
Bus
station, shopping station, car Correct article usage
a Bus
park
, two
new housing area
, and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
pedestrian
Correct article usage
a pedestrian
area
. There are diminishment of main
road and one lined shop Change the article
the main
area
. Moreover
, there are shifting position
in other facilities like housing Fix the agreement mistake
positions
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
at
the south and housing Change preposition
in
area
that Fix the agreement mistake
areas
previously
located near the Add a missing verb
were previously
park
. There are also
reducement
in size Correct your spelling
replacement
such
as school building
and Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
park
.
On the other side, infrastructure is getting Fix the agreement mistake
parks
convinient
by allowing people to access anywhere they want. The town which Correct your spelling
convenient
are
previously Wrong verb form
was
non integrated
and Add a hyphen
non-integrated
limit
the movement to the other side, changed into Wrong verb form
limited
two
Correct determiner usage
a
way
road with Correct your spelling
two-way
pedestrian friendly
in the middle.Add a hyphen
pedestrian-friendly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, area, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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