The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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line chart illustrates the number of users
for
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of

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an underground station, located in
london
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London

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, between the time 6 o'clock in the morning, and 22.
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it appears that the peak times are 8, and 18, fuerther more, the lowest times are 6, 16, and 22. Getting into more
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detail
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detail

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detailes
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detail
,
number
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a number
the number

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of passengers starts low at the
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beginning
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beginning

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begening
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beginning
of the day, after that it
reachs
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reaches

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400
person
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people

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in 8, with an average of 250 in 7 and 9,
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followed
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followed

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flolloewd
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followed
by, a small steady state around 11 to 15, with
average
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an average

The noun phrase average seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of 300 users, than it gets to the second peak, between 17 and 19, almost reaching 400, than for 20, 21, and 22, it kept low, with an average 150. In general, it seems that the behaviour of passengers in
th efirst
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the first

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half of
th
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the

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eline graph
in
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is

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almost
simillar
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similar

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to the second half, as if the people go in the morning and come back again
in
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at

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the
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apply

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nights
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night

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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