Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: - Details about the child. - What type of books you need. - When and where you are going to teach this child

Hello Annie, How are you? I hope you are doing great. I am reaching out to share
an exciting news
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about a public event
that is
organized by our society
on
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this
weekend-the annual order and culture programme.
This
event has various
sort
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of arrangements for people of every age group as different competitions are arranged in
field
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of paintings, crafting work and presenting self-made sculptures. even more, during
night
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there will be a special multicultural dance performance representing
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tradition
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of different geographical communities. I immediately thought of you, as I know that you love to make vibrant paintings and if you want, I will put your name in the registrations.
Also
, you need to
summit
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your identification proof that you can bring on the day you arrive. I propose
meet
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at our home before the festival celebrations because it's more than two years. You did not come
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my place and buy
this
chance we will
also
spend some time with each other. Plus, it will be
great
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opportunity for us to explore new cultural accomplishments. looking forward to
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from you soon. Warm regards, Sarab
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure paragraphs are clearly distinct and focused on a single idea.
complete response
Provide more concise and structured responses to cover all aspects of the task clearly.
greeting and closing
The letter begins with a warm greeting and ends with a friendly closing, appropriate for a letter to a friend.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for an invitation to a public event.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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