A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; •say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the

road

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condition

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of our neighbourhood to your prestigious organisation. I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Since my childhood till

last

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year, your firm maintained the

road

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well. Anyhow, after the recent storm, the

road

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condition

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is very poor when we compare with previous years.

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, after the

snowstorm

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snowstorm,

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the

road

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condition

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was worse than in previous years.

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, the

water

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was

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stagnated on the floor

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of draining through a drainage tunnel. Apart from that, stagnated

water

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helps the insects to lay eggs in the dirty

water

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and the insects born from that location cause issues to our bodies by touching our food materials.

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, I would like to share some suggestions to improve the current

condition

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of the

road

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First,

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ask the sewage treatment people to clear out the dirty

water

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Secondly

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, ask the

road

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construction people to rectify the issue and try to solve the problem on the spot itself. I hope you can understand our situation and my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam

jeeveshkb22Fri Apr 05 2024

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coherence cohesion

Use a variety of sentence structures to enhance coherence.

coherence cohesion

Clearly outline your points in separate paragraphs to improve the logical flow of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a clear progression of ideas throughout the letter for better cohesion.

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Address the letter to a specific department or individual if possible, for a more personalized approach.

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Consider providing specific examples or dates to strengthen the impact of your complaint.

coherence cohesion

Effective use of paragraphs to organize the content.

task achievement

Good use of a formal tone appropriate for the context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

197 words

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