A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; •say what you would like them to do about it.

#road #home #town #city #council #•tell #•explain #nature #complaint #•say

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the

road

condition

of our neighbourhood to your prestigious organisation. I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Since my childhood till

last

year, your firm maintained the

road

well. Anyhow, after the recent storm, the

road

condition

is very poor when we compare with previous years.

Furthermore

, after the

snowstorm

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snowstorm,

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the

road

condition

was worse than in previous years.

In addition

, the

water

was

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apply

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stagnated on the floor

instead

of draining through a drainage tunnel. Apart from that, stagnated

water

helps the insects to lay eggs in the dirty

water

and the insects born from that location cause issues to our bodies by touching our food materials.

Finally

, I would like to share some suggestions to improve the current

condition

of the

road

First,

ask the sewage treatment people to clear out the dirty

water

Secondly

, ask the

road

construction people to rectify the issue and try to solve the problem on the spot itself. I hope you can understand our situation and my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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