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A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; •say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to complain about the
road
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condition
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 of our neighbourhood to your prestigious organisation. I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Since my childhood till
last
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 year, your firm maintained the
road
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 well. Anyhow, after the recent storm, the
road
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condition
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 is very poor when we compare with previous years.
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, after the
snowstorm
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snowstorm,
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 the
road
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condition
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 was worse than in previous years.
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, the
water
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was
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stagnated on the floor
instead
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 of draining through a drainage tunnel. Apart from that, stagnated
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 helps the insects to lay eggs in the dirty
water
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 and the insects born from that location cause issues to our bodies by touching our food materials.
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, I would like to share some suggestions to improve the current
condition
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 of the
road
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.
First,
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ask the sewage treatment people to clear out the dirty
water
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.
Secondly
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, ask the
road
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 construction people to rectify the issue and try to solve the problem on the spot itself. I hope you can understand our situation and my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam
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coherence cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures to enhance coherence.
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Clearly outline your points in separate paragraphs to improve the logical flow of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear progression of ideas throughout the letter for better cohesion.
task achievement
Address the letter to a specific department or individual if possible, for a more personalized approach.
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Consider providing specific examples or dates to strengthen the impact of your complaint.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of paragraphs to organize the content.
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Good use of a formal tone appropriate for the context.
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