A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; •say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the
road
condition
of our neighbourhood to your prestigious organisation. I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Since my childhood till
last
year, your firm maintained the
road
well. Anyhow, after the recent storm, the
road
condition
is very poor when we compare with previous years.
Furthermore
, after the
snowstorm
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the
road
condition
was worse than in previous years.
In addition
, the
water
was
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stagnated on the floor
instead
of draining through a drainage tunnel. Apart from that, stagnated
water
helps the insects to lay eggs in the dirty
water
and the insects born from that location cause issues to our bodies by touching our food materials.
Finally
, I would like to share some suggestions to improve the current
condition
of the
road
.
First,
ask the sewage treatment people to clear out the dirty
water
.
Secondly
, ask the
road
construction people to rectify the issue and try to solve the problem on the spot itself. I hope you can understand our situation and my suggestions. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam
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Use a variety of sentence structures to enhance coherence.
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Clearly outline your points in separate paragraphs to improve the logical flow of the letter.
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Ensure a clear progression of ideas throughout the letter for better cohesion.
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Address the letter to a specific department or individual if possible, for a more personalized approach.
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Consider providing specific examples or dates to strengthen the impact of your complaint.
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Effective use of paragraphs to organize the content.
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Good use of a formal tone appropriate for the context.
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