The table chart below gives information about total cost and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The table chart below gives information about total cost and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The table gives information regarding the amount of money the United States of America spent in total, in billions of dollars, on imported
fish
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in 1988, 1992 and 2000,
while
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the pie chart illustrates the proportion of the
fish
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brought in from
China
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,
Canada
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, and other countries. First things
first,
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the table presents the data about the increase in expenses over the past twelve years reaching its peak in 2000 which indicates the continued demand for
fish
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by American citizens. Yet, the pie charts show that the number of goods bought from sources
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as
China
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,
Canada
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and other regions around the world changed considerably in 1988,1992 and 2000.
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, the cost of buying
fish
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for the American government from international sellers reached its highest point in 2000 and was about 10.72 billion.
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, a large proportion of them were from other countries and
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Canada
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followed by
China
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.
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, in 1988 large fraction of the pie chart was occupied by
Canada
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as the main source of
fish
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, about 60%.
This
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balance of sales shifted in 1992 and the number the US buyers purchased from Canadian sellers declined by almost 30%.
Not to mention
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, the amount of
fish
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purchased from
China
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's borders gradually grew and became 30% in 2000
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