A friend has invited you to a birthday party, but you will be unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you won’t be able to attend Suggest another time to see your friend.

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Dear Elisa, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. I am grateful that you have invited me to your birthday party.

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, I regret to inform you that I will be tied up with an official meeting on that day. I heartily apologise for

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with, I was absolutely thrilled when I received an invitation from you, believe me, I was over the moon. Thank you so much for

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invitation. I truly wish to join you on your special day, meanwhile, I received a call from my senior and he informed me about our convocation with overseas clients. My attendance is important as my boss counts on me to present our work to the clients. I hope you will understand my situation.

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, I am planning to host a supper for you at my house next Sunday evening in your respect, and I hope to make up for skipping your occasion. I am looking forward to meeting you in person to congratulate you.

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, I

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seek your forgiveness for not honouring your visit. Warm regards, Martin

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task achievement

Consider adding more specific details about the meeting to enhance the explanation.

coherence cohesion

Try to develop each paragraph more evenly to improve flow.

coherence cohesion

The letter effectively follows a clear structure with a greeting, body, and closing.

task achievement

The tone is very warm and polite, appropriate for writing to a friend.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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A friend has invited you to a birthday party, but you will be unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you won’t be able to attend Suggest another time to see your friend.

It is important for everyone, including young people to save money for their future to what extend and you agree or disagree with this statement

The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local costum and behavior others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural difference Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays online shopping is rapidly replacing physical shopping in stores. What are the positives and negatives of this development, in your opinion? Give some relevant examples.

Produced of Cotton between 2004 and 2018 in the leading nations