The first graph below shows the weight (in tones) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tones) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month (in millimetres.) Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

In 2013, the two

graph

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illustrated the weight of

fruit

produced, and the amount of fertiliser used—in tones— by a field during each month. The second

graph

depict

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depicts

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the quantity of

rainfall

in each month— in

millimetres

.

Overall

, the highest

fruit

production peaked.

Conversely

, both

rainfall

and fertiliser use were at the lowest when

fruit

production increased. The first

graph

displayed the weight of

fruit

production in 2013. In the first quarter, it stood above 2

tonnes

.

Then

it

grow

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swiftly and peaked above 4

tonnes

.

In contrast

, the amount of fertiliser rose and peaked under 1

tonnes

. Afterwards, it declined rapidly and remained at approximately 0.65

tonnes

. The second

graph

illustrated

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the amount of

rainfall

. it comprised around 12

millimetres

. It

grow

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grows

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sharply and

reach

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reaches

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the highest

roughly

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at roughly

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16 in

Februrary

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February

. From April to June, it declined significantly, which stayed at around 6

millimetres

. Afterwards,

rainfall

remained stable. Between October and December, it increased markedly and stayed at about 14

millimetres

.