You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the problem. • explain what happened when you asked the hotel staff for help. • say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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letter is to write about the dissatisfaction with your hotel staff because heater of the room was not working. I will bring it

your

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knowledge that when I called your staff

then

one of them came into the room. I showed them but she told me it

will

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work and just gave us 10 minutes so that I could

called

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the electrician to fix it. Me and my wife waited 2 hours.

Then

we decided to go downside

then

I asked she told me she forgot to call the electrician. It was really unprofessional for me.

Moreover

, my kids faced a lot of problems and they suffered from cold because of

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the cold

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room. I really appreciate

if

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you talk with your staff so that

another

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customers do not face

such

kind of obstacle which we faced yesterday regarding poor customer service. I hope you understand

this

matter and will take immediate action. Yours truly, Jaspreet