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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts depict similar data in proportion for two different countries' types of status in individuals as separated, married, never married, windowed, divorced and same-sex marriage.
Overall
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, most Canadians and Australians either are or have been married.
Although
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Australia
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's ratio in married population nearly doubled compared with
Canada
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. There is a new type of individual status described as same-sex marriage only in
Canada
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.
To begin
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 with, in both
countries
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countries,
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 the highest proportion of separated and married are in total 82%, 87% in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 respectively.
Also
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, men and women being single percentage showed 7% in
Canada
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 and 5% in
Australia
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. The smallest proportion of the chart is taken by those, who are divorced (1% in
Canada
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 and 2% in
Australia
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). The number of people who are widowed in both states with between 7% and 6%. The difference between them is that Canadian law connections between men and men or women and women are seen and form 3% of the chart,
while
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 there are no same-sex marriages in
Australia
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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