The two maps below show road to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road  to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
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The maps illustrate the changes suffered by the
City
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Hospital between 2007 and 2010. The
City
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Hospital and the Ring
Road
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remained the same during the period aforementioned.
However
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, it is important to note that the south of the map in 2010 was completely renovated transforming both sides of the Hospital
Road
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into a bus station and a staff car park. In 2010, east of the
City
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Hospital was built, a public car park that before in 2007 was located southeast of the map below the
City
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Hospital
while
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the staff parking space remained in the same place but separated from the public parking space. In 2007, we observed that Hospital Rd had multiple bus stops on both sides of the
road
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whereas
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in 2010 they removed them and converted them into a bus station.
In addition
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, they built two roundabouts at the beginning and end of the same
road
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improving the flow the traffic.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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