The two maps below show road to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The two maps below show road  to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
The maps illustrate the changes suffered by the
City
Hospital between 2007 and 2010. The
City
Hospital and the Ring
Road
remained the same during the period aforementioned.
However
, it is important to note that the south of the map in 2010 was completely renovated transforming both sides of the Hospital
Road
into a bus station and a staff car park. In 2010, east of the
City
Hospital was built, a public car park that before in 2007 was located southeast of the map below the
City
Hospital
while
the staff parking space remained in the same place but separated from the public parking space. In 2007, we observed that Hospital Rd had multiple bus stops on both sides of the
road
whereas
in 2010 they removed them and converted them into a bus station.
In addition
, they built two roundabouts at the beginning and end of the same
road
improving the flow the traffic.
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