Both government and individual are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries,

government

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governments

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and citizens are investing more money

on

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in

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protecting

animals

,

while

others would argue that it is a better investment

to

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addressing social problems.

For instance

,healthcare systems and poverty.

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essay completely discusses

with

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this

view because

people

are the main

responsible

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of

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wildlife destruction and

caused

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severe environmental problems.

Government

and

individual

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individuals

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should take

a

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responsibility and invest to protect wildlife from extinction . Currently, a huge number of

animals

and species

extinct

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, which

lead

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leads

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into

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ecosystem disorder .

This

problem has a negative effect on our

lives

and planet as well .

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, when governments

spending

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money on national reserves and

also

speared

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awareness among

people

, we will have a positive impact on our

lives

, economy and health because

animals

the

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main factor

to

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in

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preserving

people

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life

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lives

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and

also

our planet.

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, bees have the power and capacity to

safe

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the earth and decline natural disasters. Once bees become extinct, that will be a worse thing we will face.

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, the

government

should

instilling

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the concept of conservation wildlife and environment protection are essential for our

lives

and health and

also

its animal rights to live in their habitats far away from

people

and pollution. Because of that the pattern

life

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of life

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will change completely into healthier

people

and rich countries

due to

different sources

sure

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as good vegetables and fruits without needing to harm and cost chemical products , and

also

chicken and beef without hormones.

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, in 2015 in the

Uk

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the highest number of cases related

cancer

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to cancer

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patients,

because

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of diet and lifestyle which

are

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without natural resources. In conclusion,

government

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the government

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and citizens should cooperate to create a better environment for

animals

and spend money on natural reserves. I believe that assistance

to build

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better

lives

for

people

as well,

and

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help to

creat

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health

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and rich communities. We have already enough doctors and charities but we don’t care about

animals

at all these days .