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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, there are an increasing number of employees that are lacking
non-congnitive
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non-cognitive
skills
such
 as communication
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skills
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, team-working
skill
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skills
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,
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and creactivity
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creactivity
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creativity
, to name but a few.
This
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 to examine the rationales behind
this
 issue and illustrate the influence of the lack of
such
skills
. To commence with, one of the underlying
reason
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 why employees are lacking of soft
skills
 is that these
kind
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 of
skills
 are difficult to teach, especially in Asian countries
such
 as China and
Korean
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Korea
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.
Due to
 the examination-oriented
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education
 system, most, if not all of the people in
such
 countries cannot develop their own soft
skills
 effectively.
For example
, people in Hong Kong put much effort and considerable time
in
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papers
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, training exam
skills
,
participating
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and participating
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tutorial
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in tutorial
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class
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classes
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.
Therefore
, there is less, if not no time left for them to cultivate their non-cognitive
skills
, which cannot be taught in
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textbook
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textbooks
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,
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or tuturial
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tutorial
class
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. For that reason, when they enter their workplaces, it
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 no coincidence that they
are
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lack
of
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soft
skills
. Worse still, there are some ramifications of the lack of
such
skills
. The most
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dominant
 one is that their
competiveness
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competitiveness
 will be decreased
due to
 the degeneration of the university degree. As university graduates are ubiquitous in the impending 21st
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century
, many companies will not only look for your educational level,but they will
also
 tend to look for your soft
skills
 since everyone
need
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 to cooperate with each other in their workplaces.
For instance
, when I work at a commercial company, I need to collaborate with my
assitanst
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assistant
 and my teammate in order to give a flawless proposal to my boss.
Therefore
, without the
well
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development of
the
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soft
skills
, seldom will a person get employed.
To sum up
, on top of
priortising
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prioritising
prioritizing
 academic performance, the cultivation of
the
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soft
skills
 cannot be overlooked. With the
nuturing
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nurturing
 of
the
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soft
skills
, it is my fervent conviction that it will significantly bolster one's
competiveness
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competitiveness
 when someone
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 to look for a job.
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introduction conclusion present
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relevant specific examples
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