You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The presented line chart compares data about how much coffee 3 various countries send to other countries from 2002 to 2012 per Klb grams.
Overall
, it was important that the trend of all countries increased over the period of 10 years;
additionally
, most of the time Brazil exported more coffee
instead
of the others.
According to
the diagram, at the start, Costa Rica, the main country that had a lot of exportation, was 15;
then
it reduced moderately and its amount was the same as Brazil in 2003 at 13;
moreover
, hit the nadir at 7 in 2006;
thereafter
, it climbed significantly to the 20 in 2012. Brazil, the second country, reached 12 in 2002 after that it jumped to 20 in 2008;
however
, between 2008 and 2010, its fashion declined to 18, yet it rose to 25 in 2012 and reached the first level. The graph demonstrates that in the beginning, Colombia touched 5;
thereafter
, it grew to 12 and its number was the same as Costa Rica in 2005 by 9;
furthermore
, it fell and hit Costa Rica at 8 in 2007;
moreover
, it touched the lowest mark at 2 in 2008. Later it leapt to the 15 in 2012.
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