You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides
the
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information on how much
coffee
exported from three different countries over a decade.
Overall
, it can be seen that all
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three countries had a growth
on
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sales throughout
10
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the 10
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years
with Brazil
became
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becoming
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a
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highest exporter and Costa Rica
was
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the lowest. In terms of Costa Rica trends, in 2002, the number of
coffee
exported stood exactly at 15
million
before it experienced a moderate decrease by around half in 2006. After that, the amount of
coffee
exported had an exponential increase and reached its peak at 20
million
within the
last
six
years
.
Similarly
, the number of
coffee
exports
in Colombia saw a great growth between 2002 and 2006, from 5 to 12
million
.
However
, in the next two
years
, it fell sharply to 2
million
and it recovered again with a sharp
rose
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to 15
million
at the end
of the survey. Regarding Brazil, which was the highest exporter within the period, the
overall
trend mostly increased during the period. In the first six
years
,
exports
experienced an upward trend with
exports
rocketing by 8
million
. After experiencing a slight slump from 2008 to 2010, the figures started to rise again and finished at 25
million
coffee
exports
, making the country a broken record over the
years
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, years, million, exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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