A foreign friend of yours plans to visit your place and stay with you,but you are not available on that date.give your friend another alternative date for the visit.In your letter,you should,apologise for it.Explain what you are doing on that date suggest to her an alternate time to come.

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Dear Komal, Hope you and your boyfriend are doing great.

Lastweek

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Last week

,I got your letter in which

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your

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planning to

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canada

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and spend some time with me.I think that would be

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great opportunity for us to spend some

qulity

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time,but

unfortunatly

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unfortunately

I will not be available on that days.I feel really bad to say

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I have made some plans

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those days when you're planning to see me.I am really very sorry for the

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inconvenience

. I have made plans already with my family

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Thanksgiving weekend 11th

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to 15th

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.We are going to visit my

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friends

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Place in Alberta.

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, we will visit beautiful lakes as well.That place is quite far from my town,so we have booked flight tickets in advance. Again sorry to say

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we can't meet on those days,

instead

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thanksgiving

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we can plan to meet on

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.In my perception that would be

great

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time as well.If you can make it your visit on

diwali

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which is after

thanksgiving

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on following weekend.Please try to come on

diwali

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ratherthan

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rather than

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. I am waiting for your response.I'm very excited to meet you. See you

then

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. Best regards, Dhruvi Patel

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suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for the context.

greeting and closing

The opening and closing of the letter are appropriate, providing a polite and personal touch.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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194 words

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