The diagram below shows the process of producing biofuel : how ethanol is made.

The diagram below shows the process of producing biofuel : how ethanol is made.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process of producing biofuel : how ethanol is made.
The diagram illustrates information about the circular
process
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of producing biofuel specifically ethanol. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is obvious that a five-
step
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process
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which
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starts from plants and
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the produced biofuel is burnt in vehicles. It can be assumed that plants and trees, as an initial
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, are harvested and collected by farmers and in the next
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, the products are sent to a pre-processing
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to chop and smash. The main
products
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of the previous stage
are
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cellulose, which is the raw material
of
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synthesizing ethanol,
transforms
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into sugars through an experimental
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. The next
step
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includes
biological
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a biological
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process
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through adding microorganisms in order to synthesize ethanol. The synthesized fuel is utilized as
clean
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fuel in
transports
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transport
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.
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, greenhouse gases particularly carbon dioxide are produced in combustion
engine
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engines
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and
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spread in the atmosphere.
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, greenery exposed to sunlight adsorbs gases as
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energy to grow and
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harvested so on.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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