You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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These images represent the current map of Bunborough and the project plans for 2024. In

this

essay they will be compared, analyzing each feature.

Firstly

, looking into the present situation of the village, there are 3 main roads and 2 of them create a triangular figure in which are situated some shops.

Furthermore

, above the horizontal road, there are 4 houses, and 2 of them are beneath it. Walking on the coast, 3 different fishing ports can be found and a beach on the other side of them.

On the other hand

, the plan proposed for the future doesn't change anything about shops and beaches. Whilst, the residence area is going to be extended at the upper corner.

In addition

, two hotels are going to be built, one on each side of the gulf. Going on, a new train line, with

also

a train station, is going to be created from the south to the upper right corner. Despite

this

, the fishing ports are going to be replaced by a promenade that extends through the coast. In conclusion, the highroads to Manchester and to Lynwich are going to remain the same.

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