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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The given line charts compare the proportion of the number of people who are from four Asian countries and reside in
cities
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 between 1970 and 2020.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the number of people who lived in
cities
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 increased with the passage of time in the mentioned countries except the
Philippines
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.
In addition
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, the highest number of individuals who were city dwellers belongs to Malaysian residents. Indonesians had the lowest level of preference to live in
cities
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, reaching around a fifth,
while
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 the figure for the
Philippines
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 accounted for about half of the total population in the year 1990.
Moreover
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, Malaysia overtook the
Philippines
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 in terms of the rate of the population living in an urban approximately in 1988. Looking at the given period after 1990, four-fifths of Malaysians will be anticipated to live in
cities
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instead
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 of the countryside in 2040.
Furthermore
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, Indonesians were replaced as a second nation in
this
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 term in 2010 to achieve 60% in 2040. It can be seen several fluctuations in the
Philippines
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 figure.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, philippines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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