Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request these documents.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
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Therefore
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last
year. My employer has asked me to provide all the details as early as possible. The last
day of submission is 25th July which is a week from now.
I really look forward to your prompt response.
Yours Faithfully,
Jason MarshSubmitted by yash334 on
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The letter fully addresses the task and provides all necessary information. For an even better task response, ensuring precision in details like the correct name and addressing the recipient directly would be helpful.
coherence cohesion
Ensure paragraphs each focus on a single idea for better clarity. For instance, the request and reason for the request could be separated more clearly.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and formal, fitting the context of the letter.
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The letter maintains a suitable writing tone throughout, being polite and professional.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite