The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph compares the proportion of the cities' population in

four

Asain

countries

over the 70-year period.

It is clear that

four

countries

all saw

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significant growth in the percentage between 1970 and 2040. It is

also

noticeable that Malaysia

is

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has

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by far the highest figure

among

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of

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the

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all. In 1970,

Philippines

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the Philippines

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ranked as the

first,

with slightly above 30% of the population

lives

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living

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in cities. Followed by Malaysia(30%), and Thailand and Indonesia, which were between 10% to 20% respectively. By 2020, Malaysia had overtook

Philippines

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the Philippines

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, rising significantly to 60%.

In contrast

, the the Philippines counterpart saw a drop to 45%, with Thailand and Indonesia

accounted

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for the same percentage at 28%. From 2010 to 2020, all

four

countries

experienced a

continous

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continuous

increase. Looking at the predictions for 2040, the percentage of those

four

countries

will all reach their peaks, with 80% of

Malaysian

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Malaysians

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, 60% of

Indonesian

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Indonesians

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, and nearly 50% of

Philippine

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Philippines

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and

Thai

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Thais

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will live

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living

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in cities.