The diagrams below show the life cycle of a speicies of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information about the life cycle of
salmon
which is a species of large fish. Overall
, there are three main stages begining
with fry, ending with Correct your spelling
beginning
adult
salmon
, before turning back the life cycle.
First and foremost, baby salmons are born from salmon
eggs, which are known as fry. They have
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are
centimeters
in length and they live in Change the spelling
centimetres
lower
river, where water flows Add an article
the lower
fastly
. It takes them about 4 years to develop in there. Rephrase
fast
Then
, their size grow
up 2-3 times to become smolts.
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grows
Secondly
, the smolt immigrates to open
sea and lives in there. They mature for 5 years before Correct article usage
the open
tranforming
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transforming
to
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into
adult
salmon
. Adult
salmon
may reach 70-76 cemtimeters
in length. They swim to Correct your spelling
centimetres
upper
river, Add an article
the upper
where
has Correct word choice
which
slow
flow. In Correct article usage
a slow
this
place, adult
salmons settle down approximately
5-6 months. They seed eggs near Change preposition
for approximately
by
reeds and small stones.
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apply
Last
but not least, salmon
eggs evolve to
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into
the
fry, which moves to Correct article usage
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lower
river Add an article
the lower
following
by water flow. It starts the new Wrong verb form
followed
cylce
life of Correct your spelling
cycle
salmon
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