The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The charts compare in ownership of electrical machines and
amount
of time spent doing housework in homes in 1920 and 2019.
Correct article usage
the amount
Overall
, it is clear that
the figure for refrigerator
used highest from other machines. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
On the other hand
, the figure for washing
Add an article
the washing
machine
was Fix the agreement mistake
machines
lowest
in the given years.
It is proved thatCorrect article usage
the lowest
,
the figure for Remove the comma
apply
refrigerator
was using the highest percentage of 1 to 100,from 1920 to 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
However
, vacuum
cleaner was Add an article
the vacuum
second
Change the article
the second
machine
which was using
Wrong verb form
used
the
percentage of 30 to 100, from 1920 to 2019. Vacuum cleaner Correct article usage
a
used
increased gradually and reached a peak of the highest. On the Replace the word
use
another
hand,Correct quantifier usage
other
in
1920 to 1960 washing Change preposition
from
machine
used
rose slowly from 30% to 100%. Replace the word
use
Then
, in 1980 it was decreasing
to 70% from 60%. Wrong verb form
decreased
Therefore
, in the years of
2000 and 2019 washing Change preposition
apply
machine
used lightly grew from 70% to 75%.
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Second
chart,we can see the number of hours of homework each week, per household number Change the article
The second
of
declined to 50 from 10, from 1920 to 2019.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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