The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2025.

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The maps illustrate the location of

Correct the article-noun agreement

school buildings

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school

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buildings in 2014 and the plan for developments that will happen in 2025.

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, the location of

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school

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the school

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is surrounded by trees and forests which provide a good atmosphere and fresh air to students. There is a main road in the southwest of the

school

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that leads to the parking cars next to the main entrance to the

school

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. The most noticeable changes that will occur in 2025,

the

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are the

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stadium field will

demolish

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be demolished

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and

build

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apply

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a new third building with

a new parking lots

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a new parking lot

new parking lots

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in the east of the third

school

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building.

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the stadium will relocate to the southeast side of the

school

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site. A new street will be created between the main road and the new parking in the

center

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centre

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of the

school

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spot. There

also

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going to be

construct

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apply

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a new corridor between the first

school

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building and the second one to make it easier for students to move, and

also

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the corridor will connected with a path that leads to the third building.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.

More and more people tend to watch foreign movies, so local governments should encourage the development of the local film industry. I strongly agree with this statement for several reasons.

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ALL PEOPLE SHOULD STAY IN FULL-TIME EDUCATION UNTIL THEY ARE AT LEAST 18 YEARS OLD. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.