The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2025.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in

2004 and the plan for changes to the school site

in 2025.
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The maps illustrate the location of
a
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school buildings
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school
buildings in 2014 and the plan for developments that will happen in 2025.
Overall
, the location of
school
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the school
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is surrounded by trees and forests which provide a good atmosphere and fresh air to students. There is a main road in the southwest of the
school
that leads to the parking cars next to the main entrance to the
school
. The most noticeable changes that will occur in 2025,
the
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stadium field will
demolish
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be demolished
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and
build
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a new third building with
a new parking lots
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a new parking lot
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in the east of the third
school
building.
While
the stadium will relocate to the southeast side of the
school
site. A new street will be created between the main road and the new parking in the
center
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centre
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of the
school
spot. There
also
going to be
construct
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a new corridor between the first
school
building and the second one to make it easier for students to move, and
also
the corridor will connected with a path that leads to the third building.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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