The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2025.
The maps illustrate the location of
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
school buildings
a school building
school
buildings in 2014 and the plan for developments that will happen in 2025.
Overall
, the location of school
is surrounded by trees and forests which provide a good atmosphere and fresh air to students. There is a main road in the southwest of the Add an article
the school
school
that leads to the parking cars next to the main entrance to the school
.
The most noticeable changes that will occur in 2025, the
stadium field will Add a missing verb
are the
demolish
and Wrong verb form
be demolished
build
a new third building with Verb problem
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a new parking lots
in the east of the third Correct the article-noun agreement
a new parking lot
new parking lots
school
building. While
the stadium will relocate to the southeast side of the school
site.
A new street will be created between the main road and the new parking in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
school
spot. There also
going to be construct
a new corridor between the first Verb problem
apply
school
building and the second one to make it easier for students to move, and also
the corridor will connected with a path that leads to the third building.Submitted by ghazl.1998g on
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