The diagram below gives information about stages of the process of producing of olive oil.

The diagram below gives information about stages of the process of producing of olive oil.
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The provided diagram gives information about how olive oil is produced.
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, there are 8 stages in
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picture, where the olives are collected by workers, and delivered by lorry to the stores. it is obviously seen that
the first step is
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that the olives are collected with
rake
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a rake
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by workers,
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then
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and then
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kept
into
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in
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the vat
during
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for
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the
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apply
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2-3 days.
The next step is
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that at
this
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machine, olives are rinsed under cold water,
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smashed into small pieces by hammers before being divided into 2 different products. A part of the olive results from the crushing machine become olive stones contained in containers, meanwhile, another one called olive paste flows in a tube to a pressing and filtering system. After being pressed hydraulically
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then
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and then
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filtered to be oil,
this
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mixture will be combined with water in a centrifuge before being extracted into bottles and transported to shops as completed olive oil.
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