The diagram below gives information about stages of the process of producing of olive oil.
The provided diagram gives information about how olive oil is produced.
Overall
, there are 8 stages in Linking Words
this
picture, where the olives are collected by workers, and delivered by lorry to the stores.
it is obviously seen that Linking Words
the first step is
that the olives are collected with Linking Words
rake
by workers, Correct article usage
a rake
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then
kept Correct word choice
and then
into
the vat Change preposition
in
during
Change preposition
for
the
2-3 days. Correct article usage
apply
The next step is
that at Linking Words
this
machine, olives are rinsed under cold water, Linking Words
then
smashed into small pieces by hammers before being divided into 2 different products. A part of the olive results from the crushing machine become olive stones contained in containers, meanwhile, another one called olive paste flows in a tube to a pressing and filtering system. After being pressed hydraulically Linking Words
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then
filtered to be oil, Correct word choice
and then
this
mixture will be combined with water in a centrifuge before being extracted into bottles and transported to shops as completed olive oil.Linking Words
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