In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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always has been an unknown world, making people wonder how it will be
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One of the expectations is the widespread use of driverless vehicles;
cars
, all
transport
means and trucks that only
transport
passengers. The question here is what advantages and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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will come with
this
trend and which one
outweight
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outweighs
another? In my opinion, the advantages are outstanding. To start with advantages, using driverless autos leads to less possibility of accidents and more safety. AI, which will be the driver, is accurate enough
at following
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the rules.
Therefore
, with safe speed and obeying the rules, there will be no deadly accidents, taking so many lives.
Moreover
, travel
time
will be shorter because unless humans, AI does not need to take a rest once
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every 3 hours of driving.
Thus
, they can
transport
passengers without any
time
wasted. It means that
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system will function flawlessly. Another benefit of
this
trend is that public
transport
can be 24/7. There is no driver so
transport
means,
such
as trains, buses and
taxies
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taxis
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will be able to be active all day and night.
However
, there might be some disadvantages for these vehicles.
Firstly
, some people regard driving as a hobby. They enjoy riding, and with the rise of driverless
cars
, they may lose their
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activity.
Secondly
, even if programmers check their codes on automatic
cars
several times, AI still can make mistakes
due to
a bug or glitch in its programming. Some dangerous situations
occurred
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in driving need fast reactions and programmers may fail to prepare AI for it.
For example
, AI can lose
the
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control of the car
while
driving
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a specific moment which can lead to a
catestrophic
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catastrophic
accident. In conclusion, higher
safty
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safety
, shorter travel
time
and no wasted
time
in travelling
makes
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driveless
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driverless
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autos something to welcome.
On the other hand
, there are a couple of concerns about these
cars
, including
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lost
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of
favorite
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a favorite
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hobby for some people and AI programming bugs which sometimes can lead to dangerous accidents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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