The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts illustrate the main
reasons
visitors visited Orange
City
in 2006 and 2016.
Overall
, people coming to Orange
City
because of restaurants and 'other'
reasons
increased,
while
the rest of the
reasons
for visiting the
city
saw a dwindle. Restaurants that were second to the
last
reason
tourists came in 2006 saw around 30% of a dramatic spike in 2016 from 10.0% to 41.0% taking the biggest part of the
reason
.
Likewise
, 'other'
reasons
inclined slightly remaining the least consumed
reason
to visit the place. Annual events that took just below 50% of the purpose people coming to Orange
city
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City
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declined 13%, reaching 32.0% in 2016. Other two
reasons
that took a big part of the purpose
besides
annual events, dropped
theaters
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theatres
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and museums by 5% and 16% to 8% and 11% respectively. In 2016,
theaters
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theatres
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became the least
favorable
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favourable
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reason
for visitors
traveling
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travelling
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to Orange
City
.
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