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The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts illustrate the main
reasons
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 visitors visited Orange
City
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 in 2006 and 2016.
Overall
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, people coming to Orange
City
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 because of restaurants and 'other'
reasons
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 increased,
while
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 the rest of the
reasons
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 for visiting the
city
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 saw a dwindle. Restaurants that were second to the
last
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reason
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 tourists came in 2006 saw around 30% of a dramatic spike in 2016 from 10.0% to 41.0% taking the biggest part of the
reason
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.
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, 'other'
reasons
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 inclined slightly remaining the least consumed
reason
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 to visit the place. Annual events that took just below 50% of the purpose people coming to Orange
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city
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City
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 declined 13%, reaching 32.0% in 2016. Other two
reasons
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 that took a big part of the purpose
besides
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 annual events, dropped
theaters
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theatres
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 and museums by 5% and 16% to 8% and 11% respectively. In 2016,
theaters
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theatres
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 became the least
favorable
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favourable
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reason
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 for visitors
traveling
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travelling
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 to Orange
City
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.

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