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The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of millions of five types of mobile phones sold over a period of six
years
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: from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
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, Samsung experienced the highest climb over the
years
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,
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in
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contrast
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contrast,
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 Motorola`s numbers plummeted significantly.
Similarly
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 to Samsung, Apple
also
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 registered a sharp increase in
sales
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, compared to Nokia`s and Ericsson`s numbers
which
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, which
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 fluctuated moderately over the
years
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ending
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 up with a minor decrease. There was a significant increase in the quantity of mobile phones sold by Samsung, going from 117
million
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of
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in
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sales
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 in 2006 to 396,5
million
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 in 2012.
Likewise
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, Apple recorded a considerable soar from 2.3
million
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 units sold in 2007 to 135,8
million
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 in 2012.
Conversely
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, there was a dramatic plunge in Motorola`s
selling number
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sales numbers
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, recording a fall from 210
million
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 in 2006 to 28
million
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 in 2012. Nokia`s
sells
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sales
 fluctuated a small amount over the
years
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, climbing up from 345
million
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sales
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 in 2006 to 475
million
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 in 2008 and
then
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 decreasing slightly to 335
million
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 in 2012.
Similarly
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, Ericsson`s numbers fluctuated over the
years
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, from 74
million
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 in 2006 to reaching its peak of 102
million
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sales
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 in 2007 and
then
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 followed by a marginal decline to 28
million
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 in 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "similarly".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual sales
  • fluctuations
  • market saturation
  • technological advancements
  • consumer trends
  • brand dominance
  • growth trajectory
  • market share
  • innovations
  • peak sales
  • decline
  • stagnate
  • proliferate
  • exponential growth
  • market dynamics
  • forecast
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