You are planning a business to another city. You will have some free time to do some sightseeing while you are there. ● Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter ● Explain the purpose of the trip ● Ask about thing to do and see in the city ● Invite your friend to do something with you during your visit
Dear Jane,
It would be my pleasure to announce to you that I am
finally
coming to your city. Although
it is a business trip to Spain, I am definitely going to see you. Therefore
I am writing this
to give you a heads-up.
For your information, I am to commence a 21-day trip to Ibiza in order to attend an international conference organized by my company. However
, I am using this
opportunity to explore your city and it would be lovely to do that with you.
Meanwhile, I would love to know the fun activities that can be done in Spain and the nice places to visit. As for myself, I have been able to book a Helicopter ride and resort for one of the weekends. Also
, I found on Google about the possibility of a cable wire ride in Barcelona. I think it would be lovely to visit Camp Nou as well before ending my trip.
In view of the above, I am cordially inviting you to participate in these activities with me, and I have no doubt that it is going to be memorable.
Can't wait to see you again,
Lots of love,
Moses.Submitted by callmosomitoyin on
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task achievement
For an even more complete response, consider expanding on the purpose of the business trip with more specific details related to your business goals.
coherence cohesion
While the logical structure of your letter is good, organizing your sightseeing plans into a clear list or itinerary could enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens with a friendly greeting and concludes with a warm closing, maintaining a personal touch throughout.
task achievement
You have successfully invited your friend to join you during your visit, covering all the required points.