The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture represents the reprocessing stages of plastic bottles
such
as collecting, sorting, compressing, crushing, washing, heating and producing. It is seen that the procedure stands as an infinite loop of creating reusable products further
to be demolished and used as a material for future stock.
First,
the journey begins with an item collected and delivered to the sorting center
, so it can be put in the right section to be compressed into the proper blocks. Change the spelling
centre
The next step is
to crush these blocks so the small pieces coming out of the device could
be washed and headed for the Wrong verb form
can
further
step which is producing plastic pellets.
The specific machine is applied to create the smallest pieces which are going to be heated to form raw material. Finally
, it is heading for production
of end products Correct article usage
the production
such
as plastic appliances or even clothes which are bought by consumers.
Overall
, the method consists of seven stages. Additionally
, more than 5 services and specific facilities are required to make it work.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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