The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture represents the reprocessing stages of plastic bottles
such
as collecting, sorting, compressing, crushing, washing, heating and producing. It is seen that the procedure stands as an infinite loop of creating reusable products
further
to be demolished and used as a material for future stock.
First,
the journey begins with an item collected and delivered to the sorting
center
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, so it can be put in the right section to be compressed into the proper blocks.
The next step is
to crush these blocks so the small pieces coming out of the device
could
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be washed and headed for the
further
step which is producing plastic pellets. The specific machine is applied to create the smallest pieces which are going to be heated to form raw material.
Finally
, it is heading for
production
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the production
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of end products
such
as plastic appliances or even clothes which are bought by consumers.
Overall
, the method consists of seven stages.
Additionally
, more than 5 services and specific facilities are required to make it work.
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