Some people claim that museums and art galleries will not be need because people can see historical objects and works of arts by computers. Do you agree or disagree

The world is evolving at a rapid pace, as Technology has played a major role in the modernization of our society. Every aspect of our

life

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is now reliant on technology.

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has led

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some people

in believing

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to believe

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that the need

of visiting

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art

galleries and museums is not necessary as we

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observe historical ornaments and

potraits

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portraits

in our homes on computers. I completely

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disagree

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with the statement and in

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Firstly

, museums and

art

galleries are not just institutes allocated to the display of history and

art

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. They play a great role in uplifting a

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country's

economy

by

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tourism, as they are a massive tourist attraction.

For example

, The British Museum is

resposible

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responsible

for almost 30% of the gross revenue generated by the entire state

as well as

the Black Ink Gallery in New York is the momentous platform for

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to be bought and sold. Another reason, why I fail to agree with the remark is to distinguish between the experience of observing something physically or through a digital medium.

For instance

, A

person

could watch a historic place or a landscape on a screen but it will be not something which will

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down in the core of his memory because it will be nothing special as it takes out the fun and adventure. All you see are plain photographs or videos of famous

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.

On the other hand

,

this

account cannot be applied to every case because

situation

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and resources vary from

a

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person

to

person

. suppose that a

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person

is not able to to walk or transport himself to his desired destination which could be either

museum

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a museum

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or an

art

gallery. So

according to

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circumstances

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it would be more feasible for that individual to watch them on his or her computer. In Conclusion,

Although

it is a common belief that we should watch

peices

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pieces

of history and

art

on our computers

instead

of visiting museums and

art

galleries.

Personally

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I think it is not a respectable way to

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appericiate

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appreciate

both and

disagress

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disagrees

disagree

with

this

belief