You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003.

Write at least 150 words
The chart illustrates the percentage of Europeans in different
age
groups
who visited the gym at least once a month between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that younger
age
groups
were more likely to visit the gym frequently compared to older
groups
, with the percentage of gym-goers in the 18-23 and 24-33
age
ranges showing higher levels of fluctuation over the period. Specifically, the 24-33
age
group
had the highest percentage of gym-goers, reaching over 25% in the mid-2000s before declining to just under 20% by 2010.
Similarly
, the 18-23
age
group
saw a steady increase from around 15% in 1990 to a peak of about 22% in the late 2000s, maintaining a slight decline afterwards. The 34-43 and 44-53
age
groups
,
however
, exhibited relatively low participation rates. The 34-43
age
group
showed a gradual increase from roughly 7% in 1990 to around 12% by 2010. The 44-53
age
group
remained the lowest throughout, with only a modest rise from about 5% to around 8% over the same period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • trend
  • gym attendance
  • frequency
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • gender disparity
  • societal norms
  • lifestyle changes
  • fitness industry
  • patterns
  • economic factors
  • public health campaigns
  • technology advancements
  • accessibility
  • workout regimes
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