You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting GYM once a month or more between 1984 to 2003. Write at least 150 words
The chart illustrates the percentage of Europeans in different
age
groups
who visited the gym at least once a month between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that younger age
groups
were more likely to visit the gym frequently compared to older groups
, with the percentage of gym-goers in the 18-23 and 24-33 age
ranges showing higher levels of fluctuation over the period.
Specifically, the 24-33 age
group
had the highest percentage of gym-goers, reaching over 25% in the mid-2000s before declining to just under 20% by 2010. Similarly
, the 18-23 age
group
saw a steady increase from around 15% in 1990 to a peak of about 22% in the late 2000s, maintaining a slight decline afterwards.
The 34-43 and 44-53 age
groups
, however
, exhibited relatively low participation rates. The 34-43 age
group
showed a gradual increase from roughly 7% in 1990 to around 12% by 2010. The 44-53 age
group
remained the lowest throughout, with only a modest rise from about 5% to around 8% over the same period.Submitted by elsenglish16992 on
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