The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the considerable transformation made in the
museum
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over a period from 1998 to 2008.
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, the several changes that took place over a period of a decade. In 1998, a large
garden
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was located in the centre of the
museum
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along with
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a
cafe
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north of the
garden
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. In the
south east
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shop and WC were presented,
whereas
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the temporary exhibition room was in the southwest of the
museum
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. The ticket house was at the entrance/exit. In 2008, the
cafe
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sitting area and fountains were added in the
garden
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area, meanwhile
cafe
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was reduced in size and the WC was relocated adjacent to the
cafe
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. The temporary exhibition room was increased in size and relocated to the left of the
garden
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. The shop and bags and coats were now shifted from
southeast
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the southeast
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to
southwest
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the southwest
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of
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museum
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the museum
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.
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, a new restaurant was added next to the
cafe
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in
north-west
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the north-west
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.
Moreover
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over permanent exhibition room and ticket centre remain in the same place over a period of 10 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, garden, cafe with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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