The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
map
illustrates the layout of the museum
in 1998 and its modification in the year 2008, ten years later. Overall
, the map
depicts significant changes in the area, highlighting the development of a café seating area, a temporary exhibition room, and a restaurant.
Initially
, the map
shows a café in the northern part, a fairly large empty garden in the middle of the museum
, and an entrance on the opposite side.
In contrast
, the modified map
reveals several changes, including the addition of a restaurant next to the café, while
relocating the WC adjacent to the eating and drinking halls, making it more convenient.
One notable change is the transfer of the storage room, designated for hanging clothes and bags, to a location next to the shop. This
makes it more accessible for customers with shopping bags who want to store their belongings before going to eat or visit the museum
.
Another significant alteration is the addition of a fountain and a café seating area in the garden, enhancing the overall
experience for visitors. These changes make the museum
more enjoyable and appealing, providing a more engaging and relaxing environment for those who come to explore.Submitted by sheidafarahbakhsh36 on
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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